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Monday, February 16, 2015

"50 Shades of Grey" Movie Review

This is my movie review based solely on the film and not the book. Oh "50 Shades of Grey" where to begin.. let's start with the obvious grey. For one this is an erotic film and I feel watching it they let the objectivity of 'grey' take over more than the genre itself. Eroticism is full of bold and dark colors such as red and black. Yet the idea of 'grey' took over the movie and gave it a blah feel which is the opposite of what salacious material should does. With this in mind this set the tone for the whole film. Needless to say there wasn't enough umph. I can only recall two background songs and no background instrumentals that were sensual enough. In horror movies you can tell when something bad is getting ready to happen due to the sound effects. But this movie did not have good sound effects that put you in the mood before the act itself occurred. Now to the characters.... Christian Grey's character in the movie I felt was written par I do however feel a different actor was needed. The actress that played Anastasia Steele should have been replaced. She didn't have enough sex appeal for the audience to truly get into the fact that this was an erotic movie and not just about an alternative style of relationships. Actually Christian Grey didn't have that much sex appeal either. Even if they redid the movie with the same actors, sex appeal could have been reached if they properly built up the characters. The overall movie felt rushed in the beginning then at the end it felt like it ended rapidly. I believe more of a foreground picture of Christian Grey needed to be shown. The audience needs to see what makes him powerful and wanted by all women. For  Anastasia's character to have been a virgin I was not convinced by her actions. For one the sex scene of them first having intercourse was not that realistic for a girls first time and given the nature of their dom and sub relationship I feel the director could have really played on the pain-pleasure principle in that moment. I feel the character's eagerness to allow Christian Grey to deflower her was contradictory to her quiet, school girl personality. Although it is common that quiet girls are secretly freaky I just found it hard to believe how their relationship went from 0 to 100 in a few minutes. The movie was filled with sexual inuendos however other than sex I do not feel the dynamics between the two main characters was done properly. And after she lost her virginity she seemed to feel more empowered to say no then lost in a love cloud like most females experience. The movie felt airy as if there were many questions left unanswered and characters that weren't fully developed.  The ending was horribly disappointing. Confused on where their relationship was headed Anastasia asked Christian to show her the worst punishment since he was so caught up in the idea of her signing the contract. She asked and she received then had the audacity to feel hurt, sad and angry. And out of all the items in his play room he chose to use a leather belt for punishment and lashed her 6 times on the rear. For that to be his worst I can't fathom what the fuss was about especially for her to possibly end their relationship. After all that's what she asked for so how can she be mad at him.  It was evident the film did not get its point across as the theater audience laughed more than ooh and awed. This film should have either remained just a book or altered so that the visual effects gave the viewers the same feelings the readers had. What works for one medium doesn't always work the same way for another.
#50ShadesOfGrey #moviereview #WasntFeelingIt

And need I say this movie showed the most sex I have ever seen in a movie shown in a theater and it did not get me the least bit horny!! #MissionFailed #PussyDoesntLie

I give this movie 2.5 stars. If you are fan of the book then keep reading, there's nothing to watch. Your imagination can do better. For those fairly new to the world of liberated sex then this is the movie to see. All others just stick to porn or the likes of other great Erotic literature.... like my work {plug} lol

Saturday, March 29, 2014

INKBOK

Hello my sexy readers! I am sooooo excited for the launch of a new site called Inkbok. It is a social community and digital library of all literature for writers and readers. It is a great platform for us writers to get our work out there to the world. I believe this website will help to change the world and combat our issue with literacy as a whole. Not only does the site pay writers competitive royalties out of their monthly gross income, and give 10% to charity, but it also provides access to unlimited reading of material on its site for just $4.95 a month. You can buy a book for $30 and in that time you could have read an infinity amount of books, stories, poems, debates, articles, published and unpublished work.... Any and all material for all ages in 6 months time. It just launched and they are readily getting the ball rolling and have a sleu of ideas to keep the site the next best thing. WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?? 

Hop on over to my page. On Inkbok you can find the majority of my material, more than what's posted here. All stories here have been revised and most I have already uploaded to Inkbok. Not only that but stories that will be in my upcoming steaming erotic anthology will be exclusively posted there. I am also working on an erotic thriller novella and novel so stay tuned for greatness! I look forward to catching you at Inkbok. Don't be a stranger and add me as a friend! 

www.inkbok.com/users/diamond-publishings

Thursday, February 27, 2014

Eroticism

Exploring every nook and cranny that encompasses ones
   sexual appetite
Releasing inhibitions that lead you into another realm
Opening ones’ mind to the vast world of erotica
Teasing senses sensually for an orgasmic relief
Inviting feelings of unforgettable pleasure
Cultivating priceless memories of lust
Invigorating the body, mind, and soul
Seducing the spirit for a never-ending journey
Making every sexual encounter more than just it’s name

Wednesday, January 29, 2014

It's Yours



I can tell you that this pussy is all yours
But would you believe me?
Look at me differently then all those whores
And maybe, just maybe you can feel me

I am not a onetime thing
Nor no summer or spring time fling
I hold my head high
But my pussy higher
I choose to say it is all for you
‘Cuz there is no one else that I want to stay true

So I’ll say it over and over
Until you know what I know
You are my one and only lover
And this is not some nighttime reality show

What do I have to do to prove to you?
You may not be my beau but you’re surely my boo
You make claims that it’s yours
But all of a sudden you act like I get on your nerves
Baby, wait please don’t get up and go
Why are you treating me like I’m some kind of hoe?

Wait, so now I’m confused
You wanted to know if it’s all yours and I’ve done all I can to show
But you’re stuck on what’s to lose
This is no buffet; you can’t have your cake and eat it too, so just go!

Sunday, January 19, 2014

First Time

Hello Loves,

Here I have my very first written erotic poem. The name ironically suits its context. Check it out and let me know what you think.  As always be sure to follow me on Twitter @NoFilter_Davira, Instagram, and give me a K+ on Klout. Stay tuned for more great works. 

XOXO
Davira 



Bear with me, it’s my first time
I know you’ve probably heard that one line
But please be mindful and take it real slow
Turn this little affair into mesmerizing show
Make me feel like I’m floating on a bed of flowers
Serenade and praise my holy temple for hours
Teach me how it’s done
Make endless love to me until I cum

The time has arrived
The anticipation of waiting for you to enter gives me hives
I lay frozen and scared yet jittery and hopeful
You make an attempt to guide yourself in, lustful
My tight, moist opening says otherwise
I begin to grow restless at your failed tries
Finally with brute pressure, you make it in
This beginning task was no easy win

You pump and moan because it feels good
I squirm and groan at the discomfort underneath my hood
Your sweat douses me with your built up glands
Oh I wish I could feel your hands
Is this love making…
Or just bodies intimately shaking?
Moments perish and you pull out and yell, “I’m done!”
I pull up, see blood and ask, “Why didn’t I cum?”

Tuesday, January 7, 2014

The Mind of a Wayne Head

Hey Luvs,

Sorry for being MIA, but I'm back on the scene now.  I've been cooking up some good projects for ya.  This next story I will break into three parts because of the length.  Simply put, its a story about daydreaming about a sexual encounter with rapper Lil Wayne.  If you like the story please do me a favor and @ the link to Lil Wayne's twitter page.  I wrote the story in hopes of receiving his feedback.  So please show your appreciation for the story by tweeting @LilTunechi and telling him to READ THIS STORY!

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Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Message

Hellooooo Loves!

Sorry I've been MIA lately. I've been working hard to give you all some grand material. I have 2 erotica novels in the works. Bare with me and lookout for any new stories I may post. Any new stories I post WILL NOT be in my novels... Can't give away all the goods, lol! 

If by chance you want to contact me or get a sneak peek of what's to come in my future projects then email me at Davira.Rayne@gmail.com 

Until next time, don't forget to tell a friend to tell a friend! ��